Fall
10 January, 2005
Author: Britney
How can you live another day when it seems so far?
The lives your suppose to love are all gone
Going daily with a struggle so hard
Trying to provoke my self to move on
As I fall you laugh as I become weak
Watch i'll come back to my feet
Laugh now smile then this is the only moment
You will suceed to watch me fall again.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| joyce ivy (68.222.105.234) -- Monday, January 10 2005, 02:53 am we all fall but we get back up good poom...joyce |
| Britney (67.136.113.101) -- Monday, January 10 2005, 04:08 am I am glad you liked my poem thanks for the comment. ~Britney~ |
| Aimee *aka* bubz (202.89.42.150) -- Tuesday, January 11 2005, 06:57 am hey i read all your new poems!!!they are all so great! i love your family one its very sweet! you have a very loving heart! kept up the good work! -aimee |
| Britney (67.136.88.163) -- Wednesday, January 12 2005, 12:16 am Thank you Aimee for posting your comment it means alot. I am greatful you enjoy and preciate them! Love ~Britney~ |
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