vinebar

Undead Army
10 January, 2005
Author: Mike

vinebar

Cold lifeless hands scratch at the wood,
They want to break out, if only they could.
They stare at the darkness with unseeing eyes,
Doing their utmost best to live, to rise.

If only they'd stayed dead, these friends of Death,
Stayed in the place they never should've left.
Burning for eternity in the pits of Hell
Never waking from the places they fell.

Now all of mankind will surely be doomed,
From the black the hour of death looms.
Raping and killing, his army will come
And with red water, Earth's rivers will run.

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (172.168.189.246) -- Wednesday, January 12 2005, 10:34 pm

Intense

Oooo I love this MIKE! Reminds me of Lucy Westenra in the book entitled Dracula, where after she died, and she was placed in a grave, she rose out to do the works of Dracula before daylight arrived.

It's very unique how you put your words together to create a masterpiece as you've done! When's the Undead Army coming on? Your poem is like a movie!

Smiley face,
Meri
LBK (84.9.36.131) -- Saturday, March 12 2005, 01:05 am

...

There will always be bad as well as good. You can't have one without the other :P
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by Mike

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2017-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com  so the proper person may be notified.