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You Saw
14 January, 2005
Author: Mere

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My arms have been revealed,
The scars, they haven't healed.
Blood rushes to my head,
Worrying about what they have said.
I'm shaking, though I'm sitting down,
Dying slowly, as I drown.
You know I'm mad, you know I cry,
You know that I will never try.

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dark3nstar (4.239.234.203) -- Monday, April 11 2005, 09:36 pm

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that was such a good poem. it like basically desribe me. i like how you write... keep it up
razors blood (24.115.65.93) -- Sunday, November 13 2005, 08:25 pm

wow

kick ass poem..its really deep and i feel i can relate
 
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