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Weekly Meeting
17 January, 2005
Author: Shaz

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Hello Misery welcome back
Glad you could drop by
Thank you so for coming
I was just about to cry
Come on in and settle down
Any chair that’s free
You know your welcome anytime
With loneliness and me
I’m expecting a few others
Sadness will drop by
Suicide and insanity
Said that they would try
Hang on here comes desperate
He’s brought despair too
Welcome guys come on in
I’ve kind of missed you
This is becoming regular
Let’s give ourselves a name
We could be a new club
We’ll call ourselves a shame
We’ll meet here at a set time
Let’s try for every day
Lets search out the lonely
Desperate and dismay
We’ll wait till folk are smiling
Then well quicken pace
Let’s do the job properly
Bring misery to their face
Make them feel unhappy
Feel that life’s not fun
Wait till they fall right in
Then our job is done

------- Author's Notes -------

55 days sobriety and getting better as I write each poem and you guys on here help the most.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (172.139.35.204) -- Monday, January 17 2005, 04:49 am

Absolutely remarkable

Shaz! The rhyming is off the hook! I love this style of writing, about meeting loneliness, desperate, and others! That was very clever! Good work Shaz!
Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Monday, January 17 2005, 11:49 am

Shaz!!!!!

this was amazing!!
well done with your 55days!please keep it up....I wanna watch your talent blossom!

much Love
Ben
x
joyce ivy (68.222.84.145) -- Monday, January 17 2005, 05:53 pm

shaz

Well shaz misery met company last night..was glad to hear from him...this poem is very good...so are the others I read on your site...this one was very creative..I really like it...congradulations again on another day of sobriety..I am very proud for you..YOU CAN DO IT...I am here when you need to talk...joyce
Rubydragon (82.10.190.131) -- Monday, January 17 2005, 11:09 pm

Hey Shaz

Congrats shaz, keep it going, I'm on 10 months now and have just become a sponsor, if you ever wanna chat, mail me, I'm here, Love your work.
 
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