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No One There...
18 January, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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when I breathe
and hold it for awhile
I feel you inside

when I place my hands upon my heart
I feel your heartbeating within mine

upon every tear that falls
from your heart
they came directly from my eyes

you feel the pain
that I feel
without you near
as for another night I must sleep alone
and wake up to no one there
but to the tears drops
that fall forever in my dreams

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Martin Vann (67.234.27.93) -- Wednesday, January 19 2005, 12:59 am

Love Is Forever, You Know, That Is True

Terrie Darlin,

From, my humble, point of view. Love is a flower, that does not grow wild, that one is called, "The Passion Flower." True love, mixed with the soft touch, of an understanding heart, that can be as rough, as your first delivery day, when you cried, and smiled, at the same time.

As you hold, more than the result of your love, even, being more than a Mom, there is, stored, deep and privately, that moment, when, your heart
met love, and you gave your all.

Your all, never ends, it is for eternity, like the rain, and the sun rays. One gives live, the other the touch, of a warm heart. I wonder, why, I write these words, so, much of the devil's Hell, has come into our lives, the love we knew, do, we give it up to him?

I think, not, you loved me then, in the good times of our love, so, I beleive, you can love me now, for nothing has changed, but, the times.

MV
Terrie* (65.147.241.70) -- Wednesday, January 19 2005, 11:00 pm

love your understanding heart...

ya got that right Babe', LOVE is FOREVER..LOVE remains STRONG..waiting can be HELL...
glad ya understood and felt the intensity of the pain through my words..caused by your absence ..
 
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