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All A Dream...
22 January, 2005
Author: Kasie

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Sitting under the bright stars
Gazing from my porch
Just thinking about you
You're the fire to my torch
A silent tear I cry
As it rolls down my cheek
Wishing that you were here
With you gone, is making me weak
I feel a tap on my shoulder
And it's you I see
You take my hand and say
"I can’t live without you baby"
You swept me off my feet
Saying passionately "I love you"
And I felt a smile form on my face
Replying with "I love you too"
"Why did we ever break up?"
Bashfully responding with "I don’t know"
And then it was silent
I never want to let you go
We look up at the sky
And we see a shooting star
I made a wish and you asked what it was
"That we never grow apart"
We stared deeply into each others eyes
It was complete bliss
Then we leaned in
...And I had my very first kiss
I knew right then it was love
I knew this was the guy
I could see our future
We be together till we die
All the sudden I hear the radio person
As he tells me the weather
How come this is happening?!
"It’ll be a cold one, don't forget that sweater!"
...I start to weakly open my eyes
Then I found out the reality...
I turned off my alarm clock
That it was all a dream...

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Meridian (172.157.172.19) -- Sunday, January 23 2005, 08:18 pm

Fantasy

I can only imagine your face, when the alarm clock went off! After dreaming about something so peaceful, and enchanted, who wouldn't wanna dream more about it? lol Very descriptive, and what a powerful imagination you've got!

This was very exquisite to read Kasie!
 
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