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Adventure
23 January, 2005
Author: Shaz

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Picture the scene picture the setting
Me and my man and some heavy petting
Then up to the window a face did appear
I couldn’t see them it wasn’t so clear

Ooi what you doing I hope it aint naughty
Piss off you pervert we are over forty
So the face went away I hope very far
Now back to my man and the job in the car

I said to my lover I said lets be daring
He said but sweetheart you know I am caring
I said lets chuck out the normal routine
You know like we did when just seventeen

So we got down and dirty right there in the back
Took off our clothes no hiding or lack
God it was good it cemented our marriage
Just wish we’d taken the car out the garage

Now the gardener looks at us odd
It was him at the window the miserable sod
Still we had fun and next time we’ll try
To get out on the main road with cars flying by

------- Author's Notes -------

I'm laughing more now so here's a mild erotic one in answer to the poll!
Promise they wont get worse and sobriety feels good.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.136.6.161) -- Sunday, January 23 2005, 01:22 am

Shaz, Great one...

'aye i hear ya...more power to ya...love moving poetry myself...
all those cars parked at the side of the road..yea.......
i think we've all been there and can appreciate it...excellent piece......
sensuality and sobriety are a feel good sensation for moving kinda poetry....
happy 4 u on your sobriety...
joyce ivy (68.19.178.236) -- Monday, January 24 2005, 02:10 am

WOW

this is great shaz..loved it...very amusing...keep writing..and congrat's on another day...great job...joyce
 
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