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Alone Without You
25 January, 2005
Author: Jose Andujar

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Alone with out you I feel myself lost within the tide
Missing breath, missing life, missing you
The darkness within, growing slowly eating away at my heart
The tears never stoping, a never ending waterfall
Within the darkness was once a light
that light precious, gentle, warm
Alone with out you, darkness covers all
Now the light of my heart is just a memory
Did I need you, was I weak
No, only a fool
A fool for loving you

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Terrie* (65.148.206.246) -- Thursday, January 27 2005, 01:52 am

Jose,one feels lost w/o the one you love...

i understand and feel this to the core...
felt this way when my love past away..
love just a memory. i'm sure you meant it in a different way when you wrote these words , but every one reads words differently hope you didn't mind how i read it..
i found it very touchin' ...thanx 4 sharin'...
joyce ivy (68.222.112.191) -- Friday, January 28 2005, 12:02 am

Jose

we are all fools sometimes Jose..but in the long run it is better to have loved and lost...than to never have loved at all....great write
 
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