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Loving My Sister
22 September, 2002
Author: CD

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I need you to know that I have always cared.
And that I do treasure all of the times that we've shared.
Your not just my sister, your also my friend.
Loving you comes easy, no need to pretend.
Sure we've had our differences, alot of sisters do.
What is so reassuring are the things we've been through.
We have surely grown closer over all of the years.
We've shared so much laughter, hard times, and tears.
And when I talk to you I feel so happy.
Even if my day has been long and crappy.
Now Sharon, I don't know why we use to fight and fuss.
But I do know I'd be lost if there were not an "us".
You make me laugh, it just comes so easy.
It makes me forget all the times that you teased me.
And over the years as we've watched our children grow.
My little girl has grown up, so hard to let go.
And your son, Ryan, so loving and sweet.
Making all the visits back home such a wonderful treat.
And as I grow older I know you'll be there.
We have so many more memories together to share.!
I love you deeply with all of my heart.
Dear sister please know this, I have from the start.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

missy (170.224.224.102) -- Sunday, December 22 2002, 04:27 am

your poems are good

i like your poems that you write because i understand because i lost my sister in a car carsh in 97
barb (206.191.91.90) -- Wednesday, January 1 2003, 04:18 am

perfect

I just read this and I think it's beautiful. You could feel the warmth and love in your writing you should be proud (standing ovation).
Sarah Ripa (209.208.107.47) -- Sunday, January 19 2003, 03:30 pm

understandable

I understand what you wrote because I lost my sister in a murder situation.
Kerry Coubrough (62.255.166.114) -- Wednesday, February 5 2003, 07:46 pm

So True

I think your poem is so true because when someone you love is no longer there or has moved away, you stop takig the little things for granted and want them to know that you have always cared.
jenny (216.152.13.29) -- Monday, March 3 2003, 01:49 am

its so real

this is just how I feel about my six sisters
Greta (67.41.113.190) -- Thursday, March 6 2003, 07:39 pm

Remarkable

This was truly the best poem I've ever read. I bet you earn a living writing poetry.
Rhonda (68.60.174.6) -- Saturday, March 8 2003, 08:00 pm

WoWoW ThiS PoEm MaKeS Me SmiLe Of HoW MuCh U ReALLy CaRe AbOuT Ur SiS ~ ~ ~

See, i never really got along with my one of my sisters, i mean we love eachother, but we just grew apart, and this poem makes me want to feel closer to her so we can grow together just like you did and i just want to say that u have a great mind and talent and you know you can really make someones day with all these sayings in your poem ~ ~ ~ KeeP It Up ~ ~ ~
Dawn (199.243.153.28) -- Tuesday, March 25 2003, 05:25 am

so true

My sister and myself just lost are Dad. He died March 15. It's been very hard but we have each other that will get us threw everything xxxx/oooo To Debbie
Jen (65.164.23.91) -- Saturday, June 21 2003, 06:25 am

WOW

im only 16 and this is exactly the way i feel about my sister We lost our mom in 2001 and aboput 8 months later my dad got remarried and my sisters 23 and when i have problems i run to her for support
Ben (67.124.44.87) -- Monday, June 23 2003, 07:29 am

Touching words!!

This poem reminds me of my daughters.......I like it very much........Though they sail on different waters......They still stay in touch!!
Nathalia Haro (66.91.38.220) -- Monday, January 29 2007, 07:14 am

AMAZING!!!

Wow dat wuz amazing i wish me n maii sis were lyk dat we r always fighting butwe still luv eachother we just don't sho it as much lol wellz anyway gr8 poem
nathan newman (168.8.52.2) -- Thursday, February 15 2007, 03:51 pm

very true about my sister and me

could i please use ur peom
 
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