Losing My Best Friend by CD

i will never forget that sunday call
a voice in the distance losing it
all the pain grabbed me tightly
i thought i would die my body so stiff
not able to cry
one minute i was sleeping the day was still new
and then the call a life was through
my heart seemed to shatter
my mind went blur
my mothers poor heart just no cure
my life flashed before me as she faded
above God reached down to get his precious dove
my life will never be the same thats true
always love your mother this is what you should do

Amber (66.185.231.84) -- Thursday, November 7 2002, 11:31 pm

Best Poem
That is the best friend poem i've ever read, i wish my best frined would write me a poem like that, it really touched me.

brittany craig (68.56.205.29) -- Friday, November 8 2002, 12:54 am

Great Poem!!!!!
That is a great poem iam sooooo glad you put it up for people to read you have touch me .thank you!

Nichole Bratton (63.192.191.6) -- Wednesday, November 27 2002, 11:55 pm

Damn!!!
I thought your poem was excellent!! That's exactly what my bestfriend and I do for each other.

lyndsey cooke (216.221.81.99) -- Friday, November 29 2002, 01:44 am

sweet
i liked this poem it was all my feelings from my heart
and i expressed these feelings to my bestfriend and
it touched her heart

monique (198.81.26.198) -- Thursday, January 9 2003, 03:08 am

beautiful
i thought this poem was beautiful.i think its nice that you express your feelings like that. im sure your best friend is very proud of you!

Liv (24.66.217.46) -- Friday, January 10 2003, 01:44 am

That poem made me cry!
Oh my god thats sad and great at the same time! I love it! You are a really good poet

Angie Lynn Roy (66.119.33.170) -- Tuesday, January 21 2003, 05:28 am

Great Poem
It really touched me.........i'd be cool if one of my friends wrote this!

Rhonda (68.60.174.6) -- Saturday, March 8 2003, 08:08 pm

this really got 2 me becuz it was a great poem..u go gurl...
this friend must be very lucky 2 have u as a friend, becuz i know how it feels when some 1 writes somethin like this...it makes u feel like u actually have some 1 who cares about u and makes u feel special...well u have a great talent hunnie so keep it up ~ ~ ~

me (62.68.225.218) -- Wednesday, April 2 2003, 04:54 pm

wow
it was really very nice

tarah (205.188.209.9) -- Wednesday, May 14 2003, 09:57 pm

wow i like ur poem alot!
thats really nice 2 kno u and ur best friend are really that close me and my best friend are like that 2 i just don't kno how descibe how much i will miss her when we have 2 part!!

Nathalia Haro (72.234.117.5) -- Friday, August 25 2006, 05:32 am

WOW!!!
Really touching. i almost cried.

Kaylah (69.152.234.155) -- Tuesday, March 20 2007, 01:49 am

Lovely.
That poem was lovely.
I loved it so much.
I wanted to cry.

barbara (66.217.37.86) -- Tuesday, April 29 2008, 11:22 pm

it was so sweet
it was so sweet it made me think of my grandma when she passed away it hurted me when she had died my life wasnt the same for the last 4 years who ever you are you ids a good poet.

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