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Skin
3 February, 2005
Author: Luke Christopher

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I can feel your skin.
Soft, like rose petals.

Running my fingers up your spine.
Looking into your eyes.

I can see your soul.
I can feel your dreams.

Our lips touch.
My world explodes.

Your kiss.
It makes me alive.

My hand travels up to your neck.
I feel your pulse.

My heart has no beat.
It stopped the moment you looked at me.

Still, I am more alive with you than I have ever been.
How did I ever breathe before you?

Will I still breathe when you leave?
Will life matter at that point?

I trace your body with my finger tips.
I have memorized it.

Every curve.
A road to heaven in my heart.

This moment in time is perfect.
That is all that matters right now.

Tomorrow may come,
But tonight will last forever.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.210.149) -- Thursday, February 3 2005, 06:18 pm

i can feel your touch in this..

Luke you are extremeley A M A Z I N G...this was
an absolutely breathtakin' read.......ya got Ump in your words......keep that pen moist...
Meridian (172.174.66.8) -- Thursday, February 3 2005, 08:28 pm

L.C.

Very good! It evokes one to shout, LUKE, CAN I HAVE YOUR AUTOGRAPH? Skin---to touch, to feel, to stroke eh? Luke, you probably got all the girls down there, falling head over heels, getting cuts and bruises for you! Laugh out loud!

Very good!
Smiley face,
Meridian
Luke Christopher (66.190.33.58) -- Thursday, February 3 2005, 10:24 pm

Nope

Mer, actually I'm very single, but thank you both for the fine compliments. I'm a pretty average guy if you saw me, but it's the heart that doesn't show on the outside.
Tessa (12.104.244.40) -- Wednesday, May 18 2005, 08:31 pm

Very Sensual

This poem is very sensual. Makes me wonder what you do when you are alone with a woman...I don't think I could trust myself after meeting you.
 
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