Goodbye
22 October, 2003
Author: Charmaine
You said we’ll be friends, even after our breakup,
You promised to be there for me, no matter what happened.
Though heartbroken as I was, I felt a little comforted,
As I’ll still have your friendship even if I didn’t have your love.
At the very beginning, things were pretty okay,
But as time passed, I felt our friendship straining.
We were drifting apart, much too far apart,
I tried to salvage our friendship, but it was just no use.
I tried so hard, so very very hard,
But how could I make things work, without your help?
One sided effort proved much too hard,
And I decided to give up, and to say my goodbye.
So goodbye to you, this my final farewell,
I’ll really miss you, but I’ll just have to live with it.
I hope you’re happy and will never be sad,
Goodbye my friend, goodbye…goodbye…
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Silkened Moon (206.214.67.80) -- Wednesday, December 3 2003, 11:08 pm I loved this poem, it sounded like a lost lover poem I had written, only it wasn't as modern. I loved this right down to the last line, romance and tragedy at the same time-Great Job! |
| chiajunkaidarryl (202.156.253.154) -- Friday, January 9 2004, 04:48 pm may i use your poem |
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