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That One Guy
5 February, 2005
Author: DuffyN

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My night was on fire,
awsomely sweet,
but some girls are liars,
and pain I can't beat.
She kissed this one guy,
knowing that one guy was mine.
I was so drunk, I forgot to hit her.
If I woulda been sober, I would've split her.
She knows it was wrong,
she knew it all along.
But whatever,now she's screwed,
for messing with her best friends dude.

------- Author's Notes -------

It's not the greatest poem, but it's based on something true so I wrote it down. - Duffy

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Saturday, February 5 2005, 04:07 pm

Duffy

I liked this poem even know that was really mest up! It was a good poem I liked it at least keep up the great work!
~Brintey~
DuffyN (205.188.116.74) -- Sunday, February 6 2005, 05:46 am

Britney

Thanks, I appreciate your comment.
 
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