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Our Circle Of Love
6 February, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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our circle of love
consists of you and I
that we freely share
with those that need to feel such great love
no other love can compare
to what you and I share

our circle of love
has only a beginning
not an end
our love flies and circulates
around the body of christ
from where it started
getting an everlasting charge

one another we never tire of
always something new
every day to share
it's not always about ourselves
but of those among us
that need to feel the calmness of our love

the puppy nurtured from a wound
and ended up being family
the tear falling
that became a friend
a smile stretched from beyond
and sent on it's way
a hug a forever embrace
touching every corner of the earth
a touch that gave out warmth and strength
and allowed peace in
a kiss that was never felt before
until lips stirred feelings within
a sunrise a sunset
seen through open eyes that stayed shut
two souls fusing together making love with the heart
erupting together in heavenly bliss
the rough waves of the sea
coming to a calmness
and stopping at ones feet
a thunderstorm roaring through a heart
and releasing what was caught inside
a rainbow of colors splashed against a soul
reviving a life that felt alone
a death a birth an everlasting
touch of strength when every cry was heard
the moon the stars renewing love
when love let go and expressed
feelings kept locked deep inside
breathing in and exhaling sunshine
the birth of a new day
a cloudy day teaching a weak heart to stay in control
our circle of love
begins with you
a trying day
when my thoughts are focused on you
is what helps me get through
and the love I have for you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (172.143.159.85) -- Sunday, February 6 2005, 11:03 pm

Shapes

Love must have a shape eh? Terrie! The circle of love, the square of love, the triangle love, the rectangle of love. When you say "Circle of Love", it reminds me of a cycle. You know, something always reminds me of something. But, in all seriousness, creative Sis. T, creative!
Meri
Terrie* (65.150.165.224) -- Monday, February 7 2005, 07:12 am

Meri...

true i went w/a circle cause of the shape of a promise ring,engagement,friendship,mothers and a wedding band.... when a man and a woman join together as one..they blend with such perfection..one is unaware where they start and where they end ..love is always a giving emotion..it has no end......a forever cirle with out having to cut any corners ..Terrie*
joyce ivy (65.12.35.197) -- Wednesday, February 9 2005, 06:46 pm

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Two soul fusing together making love with the heart...very good Terrie...you said it all in one line...lovely...such a perfect poem...love it...joyce
Clive (70.56.213.240) -- Thursday, February 10 2005, 01:47 am

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No matter the shape love can follow them all,
No matter the time it will always last till the end,
My love for my friend Terrie is true through and through
 
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