I'll Never Give Up by Terrie*

when i have a vision
or a quest i allow my heart to take charge
i do not question it
i take to it

i had one i took to it
trying to find
someone close to our hearts
he was closer to mine than i thought
he entered my life 3 x

he was always there
within my reach
i still carry the little wooden cross in my car
he made for me

i allowed myself to fall blind
i am guilty
i always placed the blame on
too much work
but i could of made the time
to find out what was going through his mind

i failed in something
i wanted so badly to succed
in finding this wonderful friend
i won't give up
i'll keep on searching
not just for his family
but also for me

i have learned to balance my life
and in the love that i give
and i started with the search
of my friend
tomorrows another day
i won't give up
if you see that i don't venture out
please tell him i tried
and that my time was up
other wise i would of not given up

Megan (205.188.116.74) -- Tuesday, February 8 2005, 01:49 am

I'll Never Give Up...
Inspiring.

joyce ivy (65.12.35.197) -- Wednesday, February 9 2005, 06:42 pm

Terrie
very good as usaul...anyone is lucky to have you as a friend...you lift people up when they are down...through your word in a poem...or your comments on their work...If I could learn to balance my time like you...I know I would fell better...great job again....joyce

Clive (70.56.213.240) -- Thursday, February 10 2005, 01:42 am

Hello my friend
I seem to have been away some time, lost in school, Your words make me miss you in every way I can,
I love to read your touch

Terrie* (65.150.174.204) -- Friday, February 11 2005, 05:27 am

Megan,
thank you sooooooo much for such a warm sincere comment..it means soooooo much..Terrie*

Terrie* (65.150.174.204) -- Friday, February 11 2005, 05:32 am

Joyce,
that was such a warm inspiring comment..my feelings are a DITTO...i believe that many of us have such a chaotic schedule and balancing a check book is a cinch to balancing life...yet life does have a way for us to get caught up...love entered my love and i touched base with the more important things in life...like Breathing...if he wasn't breathing for us i would be a code...but..life does balance out...all this and i have time left over to play ;)...Terrie*

Terrie* (65.150.174.204) -- Friday, February 11 2005, 05:38 am

Clive,your comments put such warmth in my heart
yes i can understand i remember my college days...too much school work and work and no time for a social life....awww to be missed in every way ......my words are still there they carry my signature...they carry the passion that wants out...a Terrie* original...thanx for youe warm comment my friend..your too much...good luck in your college studies...Terrie*

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