She Asked Me If, I Loved Her
8 February, 2005
Author: ShyHeart
She Asked Me If, I Loved Her
I replied, of course, I do.
Then she asked me, to take a deep breath
Then, she asked, what do you feel?
I replied, I feel you in my heart
Then she asked me, take another, deep breath,
now, what do you feel?
I replied, I feel, you in my soul,
refreshing, and giving my heart life
Then, one more time, she asked me, to take a deep breath,
what do you feel?
I replied, you are the part of me,
that, make’s my life worth while,
you are the Most, important part of me,
of, who I am, of who, I will ever be
Then, she asked, take one more deep breath,
and you will know…,
How much, “I” love you.
------- Author's Notes -------
Happy Valentines Day |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| mommie2bratsus (65.148.209.226) -- Wednesday, February 9 2005, 06:04 am Ditto....as you know how i feel..happy valentines day to you too Martin!!! |
| joyce ivy (65.12.35.197) -- Wednesday, February 9 2005, 08:28 pm This is beautiful...she is so lucky to share the love that flows so freely from your heart...Thanks for sharing and brightning my day...Joyce |
| mommie2bratsus (65.148.233.135) -- Monday, February 14 2005, 04:12 pm YES I AM LUCKY.... to share the love that flows freely from his heart..Happy Valentines Day to ALL... |
| mArLeNe (69.109.40.167) -- Tuesday, February 15 2005, 03:57 am THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL KEEP IT UP YOU'LL GO FAR! |
| joyce ivy (68.19.177.207) -- Tuesday, February 15 2005, 09:45 pm you are lucky and it seems Martin is to from your comments on his work..and I have seen the love that flows from his heart in his poetry...it's beautiful...all of them I have read...great work...martin.....good luck to you both... |
| Martin Vann (63.25.168.83) -- Wednesday, February 16 2005, 06:59 pm Joyce, mArLeNe, Mommie2bratsus, I thank you all for reading my words, I write for "All" hearts, that beleive in love. I share my heart and toughts, as the the Sun warms the earth. I do not own or cntrol the sun, yet, I feel its warmth and I hope my words, are shared and felt, by all who read my words. Love to each and everyone, as you love, me. MV |
| joyce ivy (68.19.179.223) -- Wednesday, February 16 2005, 08:54 pm you don't own it yet Martin...but your workin on it...your words and your heart are always felt within your writes...love everyone of them... |
| mommie2bratsus (65.148.205.219) -- Wednesday, February 16 2005, 09:43 pm indeed as a matter of fact i feel extremely lucky...and Martin ,Babe' ya beat me to the line of fire.. Miss Ivy,his words are indeed written from the heart not just for me.BUT for "ALL" to read/believe/feel or other wise never felt the power/heat of love before thank you for feeling his words, and yes this man could share the strength of the rising sun and the roaring waves of the sea...thank you again ... |
| Terrie* (66.81.139.154) -- Thursday, June 15 2006, 03:39 am and the sound of your lovely breathin', like it was this afternoon ,could not feel more content, inhalin' love from a distance, worth every breath i take, so now you know ...relax.. |
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