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Love Me
13 February, 2005
Author: Luke Christopher

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Broken glass
Shattered dreams
This is life
Or so it seems.

Rain in the sun.
Snow in the heat.
Happiness and peace.
Never to meet.

Bring me sun.
End this rain.
Love me once.
End this pain.

Don’t go away.
Please don’t leave.
Without this love.
I cease to breathe.

I need your love.
I want this closure.
End this pointless journey.
I want it over.

I need you close.
I need you nearer.
Evil stares back at me,
In this mirror.

Save me please,
From this knife.
Love me now.
Save my life.

------- Author's Notes -------

I usually don't rhyme, but this one felt right.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.90.187) -- Sunday, February 13 2005, 04:32 am

Hello

I really liked this poem. It was such a great poem. I loved how it flowed to. Keep up the nice work! ~Britney~
Keyonna Farrell (205.188.116.197) -- Sunday, February 13 2005, 11:33 pm

You are...

Brilliant in the way you write and what you write, every word has it's own meaning, it's own impact and together they hit harder. This poem is beautiful, emotional, and hurtful, that it's real. Thankyou for sharing, can't wait to read more from you.
Luke Christopher (66.190.33.58) -- Monday, February 14 2005, 09:29 pm

Thank You

All
Juilat (206.176.117.36) -- Thursday, March 31 2005, 08:43 pm

Wow

I love this poem, it is very very good!
 
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