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Because Of You...
14 February, 2005
Author: mArLeNe

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If you never cared before then why DO you now?
If you want to stop me then tell me HOW
I am going to do it no matter what you say
Don't keep begging me and try to see that the pain will never go away
After having said this to you
There is something that I have to do
There. I have grabbed my blade its cutting me
I have held the pain inside too long might as well set it free

How deep have I cut?
obviously NOT DEEP ENOUGH
Why do I do it?
I do it for your LOVE

Now be quiet I will be leaving this earth sooner than you think
WAIT! keep watching don't you dare blink
I cut a vain and I think this may be it
This pain doesn't compare to the way my heart was hit
So wave good bye to me and watch me disappear
The reason why I'm taking my own life will never seem clear
Tell my mother that I love her and my father that I'm gone
That I'm sorry for not staying longer; I had no where to belong
Not to worry for one day in heaven we'll all once again unite
Well I guess I'm leaving now in front of me shines a light
I hear a faint call of my name and a hand is holding mine
It is an angel telling me that I have now ran out of time
Listen closely as I tell you how much you MEANT to me
I LOVED you and thats all now I'm FOREVER FREE

------- Author's Notes -------

thank you for reading my poem!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.84.49) -- Tuesday, February 15 2005, 02:43 am

Wow

Fantastic poem! I loved how it was written girl! Beautiful writting keep up the great work!!!!!!!!! Always, ~Britney~ :D
Haven (70.20.52.12) -- Thursday, February 17 2005, 12:44 am

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omg i almost cried! Incredible poetry! YOU ARE TALENTED!! LOVED IT!!
Demon (66.212.41.197) -- Saturday, March 26 2005, 04:08 pm

great poem

wow... that was really a great poem... keep up your writing skills... awesome work....
check out mine sometime if you wish...
dark3nstar (4.239.156.46) -- Monday, April 11 2005, 01:40 am

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that was a really great poem i fell the same way... it was like the peom was describing me.. you just have to hold on... hopefully soon both of our lifes will get better... keep up the writing
Angel in Tears (81.157.217.123) -- Monday, April 11 2005, 09:39 pm

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Really good poem!Wow!My fave quote "obviously NOT DEEP ENOUGH"!I can relate :p
 
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