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Her Downfall
14 February, 2005
Author: mArLeNe

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She gave him her world she put it all at his feet
She never acted with a selfish heart because he made her heart skip a beat

He never saw beyond the physical appearance and materialistic was all he was
He never saw the beauty within her all he saw was a body with no flaws

To him she had the body of a goddess and the face of an angel
To her he had a soul of gold but the heart of a stranger

He was more to her than she was to he
But no matter how hard she tried; THIS she could never see

His words blinded her and his kisses helped this lie seal
But the wounds that in her heart he caused they could never heal

If only she could’ve seen sooner what living by his side would really bring
If she could have only said No when he bought her that “FOREVER” ring

He was “THE ONE” for her in her own eyes
But nothing he said was true she was drowning in his lies

She said he was the reason for her joy but he was the reason for her sorrow
She believed without him by her side there would be no tomorrow

I attempted to open up her eyes sorry but I have done all that I can
she is now gone and her downfall was putting her trust in a MAN

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.84.49) -- Tuesday, February 15 2005, 02:49 am

Dang!

Dang gurl just keep loving these poems! There so great! ~Britney~!
Haven (70.20.52.12) -- Thursday, February 17 2005, 01:54 am

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awsome
Diamond (152.163.100.197) -- Wednesday, May 25 2005, 06:16 pm

relate

i can really relate to this keep writting this is good....im sure alot of girls understand this because just about everybody has been down this path....the man will blind you and everybody else can tell but you....
Joanne (172.188.221.180) -- Thursday, April 26 2007, 02:56 pm

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You have got such a good talent
keep the poems comming!
 
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