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I Can't
15 February, 2005
Author: Britney

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I can't let you go cause it would hurt to much
I can't let you go cause I love you to much
I can't give a smile cause it would be fake
I can't say I love you it would be a disgrace.
I can't even look you straight in the eye without looking
at you in a huge dispise.
I can't give you a hug without feeling insucure.
I can't see that you can give me what I need very absurd.
I can't see you being that one for me.
I can't manage to be your girl anymore cause it hurts just to much.
I can't say I can't cause it's a lie thats all.
Can't you see i'm emotionally cut thats all and your the one
that caused the I can't in my mind...........those were just my thoughts.

------- Author's Notes -------

reading it if you did. :)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (172.145.6.122) -- Tuesday, February 15 2005, 09:25 pm

Hey you!

Yeah, it's hard to do something when you know the outcome. It's hard to trust or belive someone when you know, they'll lie. It's difficult. I don't blame you when you say "I Can't"!
*Meri*
Britney (67.136.84.49) -- Wednesday, February 16 2005, 03:58 am

Hello,

Yes it can be very very hard at times. Sad and very emotional alot cause of things.....! Yeah I know "I can't" I just can't very common for me now. Thanks for your comment! ~Britney~ :)
RaChEl iS cOoL! (61.68.37.99) -- Thursday, September 21 2006, 10:21 am

hy that was good!

hey you sorry i dont knoiw ur name. That was a reli good poem! Yer It can be reli hard and dificult at toimez when u r speaking to smeone u love! i totally agree.
britney (24.121.42.133) -- Thursday, March 1 2007, 01:05 am

thanks

thanks for the feed back! im glad u liked it!
 
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