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Tables Reversed
22 February, 2005
Author: Mike

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Let the bodies hit the floor.
Drenched in all the blood and gore
I stand over their lifeless flesh,
Their blood, my shoes - seeming to mesh.

Their skin trapped under my nails.
What can you do when all else fails?
Resort to violence, turn to kill,
Taking lives at my will.

Fu** them all, as if they care.
When my world fell, theyturned hide nor hair.
A lost lonely boy, a broken soul.
They see this and their hearts turn cold.

They don't realise how I feel,
The wounds so deep they'll never heal.
One day soon they'll know the truth,
It won't be me in pain, it'll be you.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LBK (84.9.36.131) -- Saturday, March 12 2005, 01:52 am

no title

"Fu** them all, as if they care."...
Holly (82.34.160.81) -- Tuesday, April 5 2005, 01:05 pm

A little gory xD But that helps the effect.

I have to admit I like this one. In some strange way I can relate to the feeling. Wanting people to feel what you have felt, as of it's not fair that they never have.
Your Friend (82.19.1.176) -- Friday, April 8 2005, 07:37 pm

"Let the bodies hit the floor"

Was that line taken from the song Mike? Remember who sent you it and remember it's the person who loves you loads.
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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