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A Matter Of Time
22 February, 2005
Author: Mike

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a bomb waiting to explode.
Inside I'm set to implde.
Its just a matter of time,
Its the end of the line.

One more word and I'm fit to bust,
A knife in my hand smothered in rust.
When I explode, all I will slice,
Will I get you? Its the luck of the dice.

All shall die.
None shall survive.
I'm about to explode.
I've gone into overload.

Watch out.
I'm dangerous.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LBK (84.9.36.131) -- Saturday, March 12 2005, 01:55 am

...

I can't say nothing...
barb (66.46.241.174) -- Saturday, March 12 2005, 02:23 pm

a cry for help

I wish I could help but I'm not qualified. you need someone to tell how you are feeling.. talk to someone please.
Mike (82.35.77.233) -- Sunday, March 13 2005, 02:07 pm

..

I don't really feel I can talk to someone qualified about how I feel.. For two reasons - 1) I find it VERY hard to talk about my feelings, since when I've tried in the past I just get rejected. 2) I can't talk to someone who gets paid to help.. That's how i am.
barb (207.245.229.166) -- Sunday, March 13 2005, 11:53 pm

talking about feelings

You know Mike I have trouble talking about my feelings so I write them. you are good at expressing yourself in your writings. you pay someone to pick-up your garbage so pay some one to pick your brain lol
Holly (82.34.160.81) -- Tuesday, April 5 2005, 12:56 pm

Shrinks.

I know how you feel Mike, shrinks just assume they know everything about the person, just from reading text books. They're just doing their job, in most cases, there's little compassion in it. My friend is seeing a shrink, and she says he couldn't really care less.
 
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