Miserable by Britney

Today I was standing then I heard my dad say
"Life's a b*tch then you die." I looked at him
blankly thinking why?

I look in your eyes and see some hurt. But,
all I do is wonder why you hold this hurt.
Look at me tell me why your miserable?

Did I do something if so what? Did
mom do something if so what and why?
Anything I can do to help?

So as I write and hold this pencil all I can
think is dad why do you look and act so
miserable?

Sometimes I think i'm your only true friend.
But then again why tell me again why your so miserable
again?

I can only hold everything I want onto a paper
or online to say how I feel. Once you were happy
but now your not what went wrong?

Now I can see your miserable within.

anonymous (152.163.100.197) -- Monday, March 7 2005, 07:21 am

then we die
ya, life's a b*tch then we die...i think this applies to alot of us...the stress of living everyday lives, paying bills, fighting traffic, coming home to problems etc....hopefully your dad will be ok....help him out if you can & mum too...thanks for sharing....bye!

Meridian (205.188.116.197) -- Monday, March 7 2005, 06:46 pm

Hey Girl!
Chicka! I hope your father's ok. Geniune poem showing your concern and empathy for him! Since your poem is in the 'questioning' category, I hope you'll get an answer, so that I can be relieved too. Well, enjoy your day Britney! Again, very Superrrrrb poem! *Meri*

Britney (67.136.105.1) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 04:45 am

Anonymous, Meridian
Hey Anonymous. Thanks for the comment appreciated it very much.Yes seriously everyday stress and stuff I mean I can only be a daughter and help as much as I can. Yeah your welcome for sharing once again thanks for the comment.! ~Britney~
Meridian my chicka lol, Yes I will show concern always. I hope I will get a answer soon and a good oen too! Thanks for being concerend also. Appreciated. I wil try to enjoy it. Thanks fir the comment. Always appreciated! ~Britney~

aimee aka bubz (202.89.42.31) -- Friday, March 11 2005, 08:48 am

britz
just awesome writting-read most ya pieces veryvery good!!!sori to hear about some stuff!!!
hope your dad gets happier - luv aimz

Britney (69.235.156.170) -- Monday, March 14 2005, 06:59 pm

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Thank you me too I think he will do better. Thank you for reading this poem. ~Britney~

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