Tear Streaked Face
8 March, 2005
Author: Kealsye N J Fahey
Why with every peice of happiness comes pain,
Why with every smile comes a tear,
Why with every love comes heartbreak,
Whats trust when all you get is deceit,
I'll never understand,
What's cracked and broken,
None other then my heart,
Eyes that have seen way to much,
Fear, envy, and loss,
Every bit of blood I have bled,
Listen to my silent crys of pain,
Watch my unfallen tears,
Take my still shaken hands,
Lead me through the fog of lies,
Carry me to a place in the skies,
Where nothing makes sence,
And there is no more ifs and whys.
------- Author's Notes -------
Just how I feel about everything that goes on in this world.How i feel deep inside my very soul and im sure many people can relate to my poem. |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| meaghan (67.168.61.201) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 02:52 am I like it kealsye. |
| STEPH (152.163.100.197) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 03:35 am I LIKE IT , BUT ITS DEPRESSING LOL BUT ITS STILL IS GOOD!!!! SO PROUD * TEARS* LOL |
| becca (24.19.175.4) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 03:41 am awww... that poem is so good.. it made my eyes water... your a good poet kealsye... VERY GOOD... :) i like it. good job hun. i love you!! |
| Benaiaha (67.160.92.26) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 03:43 am "watch my unfallen tears" ~phenomenal choice of words, brilliant metaphor "lead me through the fog of lies" ~again, so illustrative, such depth Do you feel naked? Cause your genius is showing... |
| josh van hee (172.152.46.52) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 03:47 am WOW hardcore EMO u shold write lyrics for my band |
| alex (67.183.38.95) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 04:14 am thats cool. i dont want kel-c to be sad though :( |
| mike (64.40.63.48) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 04:15 am i tried to write poetry once, didnt really come close to that, it was really good and i liked it, keep writing |
| HAZE (64.12.116.197) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 04:31 am Oh, you know you're good, don't go around and show all of us other poets up, I Loved It! |
| Austin (67.168.69.222) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 04:43 am You are very talented Kealsye, your poem is very good and truthful. Keep writing; love you. |
| Kristena..YOUR SISTER! (198.81.26.73) -- Wednesday, March 9 2005, 12:16 am Kels...That is a really good poem! I had no idea you have ever thought about writing poetry! It was really good though...Pretty AMAZING! Good job! I really like it! XoXo! |
| jake (66.52.194.193) -- Wednesday, March 9 2005, 05:19 am best one ive ever heard |
| Travis (24.17.131.81) -- Wednesday, March 9 2005, 05:25 am That was a really good poem and i thought that it was one of the BEST i have ever heard... GOOOOOOD JOB!! |
| wakeen (64.40.46.241) -- Wednesday, March 9 2005, 05:36 am very good kealsye. you are so good you should make a living off this or write music for emo bands or something u know. =) |
| Jacob Dwayne Loden (67.160.29.56) -- Wednesday, March 9 2005, 06:34 am nice, NAN wants it |
| don (24.18.14.113) -- Friday, March 11 2005, 04:30 am very good!! |
| kylee (24.18.14.113) -- Friday, March 11 2005, 04:30 am very good i have tears dont ever stop the poetry! |
| Melanie (207.200.116.199) -- Monday, April 11 2005, 07:49 pm I loved your POEM. Lol I wish I knew how to write poetry =). Bye bye Kealsye. |
| Charlie (24.18.39.170) -- Saturday, April 16 2005, 11:09 pm its poetic and what not yeah |
| sarah (207.118.48.17) -- Sunday, April 17 2005, 07:18 pm i liked it kel-c im sorry if anythings going wrong...i miss u!!! ~sarah mitchell |
| sarah (207.118.48.17) -- Sunday, April 17 2005, 07:18 pm i liked it kel-c im sorry if anythings going wrong...i miss u!!! ~sarah mitchell |
| koresa (67.168.23.226) -- Wednesday, April 27 2005, 03:29 am Kealsye that is so good. i love it. |
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