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Little Girl
8 March, 2005
Author: Shaz

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Hey little girl, come over here
Look at the puppy, to hold
Come closer little girl so you can hear
Get into my car, if you’re cold

Hey little girl, I've got sweets
Look, I’ve got me a game
Step into my world, it’s full of treats
Don’t worry, there is no shame

Hey little girl, your pretty and nice
Look, at your beautiful hair
Hey you feel cold; your arms are like ice
Come child step into my lair

Hey little girl its ok, I'm good
Don’t worry; your Mum will be proud
Here little girl, I’ll take off your hood
Let’s whisper, not be too loud

What? Little girl you got to go
Its ok child I’ll drive you there
I know where you live, its not far you know
Get in little girl, see I care

Run little girl, don’t listen to him
Its evil, he has a plan
Run fast little girl, run from the sin
Run as fast as you can

What sort of world does little girl see?
When evil lurks all around
Run little girl, run and be free
Don’t step in the shit on the ground

Watch out little girl, watch who your trust
Be careful pain comes in all sizes
Learn little girl, love is not lust
See through little girl, the disguises

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (172.16.2.18) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 06:55 pm

wow

I loved this poem it can be so true. Awesome words too!!!!! Loved it. ~Britney~ :)
barb (216.123.56.66) -- Wednesday, March 9 2005, 02:32 am

innocence stolen

What a gut wrenching writing. Isn't funny how abused kids are trying to tell people love is not lust. This writing should get the point acrossed. All the trust and carefree feeling is stolen when kids are abused. Very good writing thanks for sharing.
Meridian (172.130.166.3) -- Wednesday, March 9 2005, 06:51 pm

Very True

Women and girls be careful out there! What looks friendly may not always be friendly! I'm talking to myself too, because I can be so green at times! Sometimes strangers can get you just by asking the time, or to help them with their groceries, when all they want is to do harm. You did an excellent job on being the narrator for the antagonist and the protagonist! Right on, right on! Keep it up! *Meri*
 
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