Finally by Mike

I thought my memories had all but gone,
Searching my mind I find I was wrong.
What will it take to forget everything?
What can I do to get rid of these feelings?

Slicing my skin relieves the pain,
Only for it to return the next day.
The mask I wear is slowly slipping,
From happy to sad my face keeps flipping.

I know what I must do, but its too hard.
The pain in my heart feels like shards
Of glass, ripping me apart from the inside,
Tearing away my happy facade.

The time has come, it seems to me,
To get away from reality.
A smile on my face as I pick up the knife.
Holding my hand out, taking my own life.

Orphad (69.63.40.248) -- Wednesday, March 9 2005, 06:45 pm

full metal jacket
Hardcore Joker! HardCore

Britney (172.16.2.18) -- Wednesday, March 9 2005, 07:00 pm

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Great poems all of them. ~Britney~

aimee aka bubz (210.55.106.55) -- Friday, March 11 2005, 08:21 am

wow mike
hey you got some really good poems!!!are these all for real-itz good that guys can write stuff like this-awesome,kept writting

taylor james (212.85.21.178) -- Friday, March 11 2005, 03:23 pm

cool poem
hi mike i really likr this poem and most of your other ones...cant wait to read some more new ones >>>taylor

LBK (84.9.36.131) -- Saturday, March 12 2005, 02:11 am

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The first bit sounded promising...until I read the rest of it :|

Mike (82.35.77.233) -- Wednesday, March 16 2005, 08:13 pm

Sorry..
Sorry I don't reply to your comments.. I don't really get much time to go on this site. Barely enough time to submit my poems. I'd just like to take this oppurtunity to thank everyone for their comments, past or future. Thanks. :)

The Lost Girl (64.12.116.130) -- Sunday, April 10 2005, 12:08 am

very good.
This was a very good poem and I very much liked it. I was able to relate to it. The whole way it was expressed and carried out kept my attention.
-The Lost Girl.

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