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Sunset
27 March, 2005
Author: Silent Witness

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Sunset over mountains
Majestic on high
I lie on my back
I close my eyes
Dreams of a past
I was happy then
Now all lost
Never to be found again
The wind blows
Rustling the trees
I love the feel of that
Tranquil breeze
Pivot my head into the wind
And dream all my sweet dreams of him
My mind echoes the words to our song
Those tender sweet times
Now all gone
I can only sit and wonder why
Gaze at the sunset and tears fill my eyes

------- Author's Notes -------

Any comments welcome--all I ask is please be honest

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (172.16.1.231) -- Monday, March 28 2005, 07:46 pm

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Hi I liked the way you wrote and described your poem. ~Britney~ :) good job
Terrie* (65.136.7.218) -- Monday, March 28 2005, 10:03 pm

your words echo far and beyond many hearts...

Silent Witness, WOW!! i felt your tears fill my eyes..i know these feelings too well..thanx 4 sharin'..this is an excellent read..Terrie*
silent witness (68.234.126.129) -- Monday, April 4 2005, 04:31 am

thanks

thanks for the kind words they mean alot u guys rock
 
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