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I Should Give You A Taste
30 March, 2005
Author: Britney

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This anger of anger
This hate of hate
this pain of pain

I should give you a taste

this love of love
this walk of walk
this shame of shame

I should give you a taste

this disgrace of disgrace
this tears of tears
this loneliness of loneliness

I should give you a taste

this sadness of sadness
this power of power
this madness of madness

I should give you a taste

this blood of blood
this hurting of hurting
this heart of heart

I should give you a taste

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (172.175.175.93) -- Friday, April 1 2005, 12:57 am

Of Their Own Medicine

Give them a taste Britney! Jerry! Jerry! 'In Laws Going At It' next Jerry Springer tonight at Ten! Hhahahha.... They must've given you hurt, anger, and resentment huh? I don't blame you girl! Go after em'! I'm crazy! I'm fond of this piece! Don't stop here though! Keep them creative juices flowing!
---Meri
Britney (70.96.207.36) -- Friday, April 1 2005, 03:15 am

Thanks....

Yes I know. I guess I tend to get mad and depressed alot now days don't know why. But yeah I guess this is how people make me feel sometimes. lol Jerry.....glad you like this peice! I will try to keep it up....~britney~
Angel in Tears (81.157.217.38) -- Friday, April 1 2005, 08:44 pm

Jerry,yeah I agree

The depression is all to familiar and the only reason for it that I can gather is because the tendency of bottling up your feelings.But judging by this powerful poem,it seems you are releasing those nasty little devilish feelings inside you.Don’t stop there hun...:) Keep up the writing,An Angel in Tears xxx
Britney (70.96.207.36) -- Sunday, April 3 2005, 04:00 am

Angel.....

Thanks for your comment greatly appreciated. Yeah feelings bottled up....! I'll try not to stop I suppose. I'll try to keep up the good writing. Have a wonderful day. ~Britney~
 
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