Mummy Number 1 And Mummy Number 2
4 April, 2005
Author: Ben Franklin
Mummy number 1 takes me out
to buy toys,
as soon as we hit Hamleys
my face lights up with joy,
Mummy number 1 takes me to play on the swings
up the park,
but I get upset when the clouds come over
and we have to leave because its dark,
Mummy number 1 lets my friends come
over to play,
I feel so overjoyed that i have pals,
sometimes I just sit there with nothing to say,
Mummy number 2 has problems with daddy
because he does not give her money,
they argue,
I get upset,
I never find it funny,
Mummy number 2 leaves me in my room
to cry,
Im trying to be a good daughter,
I try and try!
Mummy number 2 shouted at me because
I was making noise in the front room,
I was on my knees pretending to be a lion,
so then she gave me 2nd degree burns with the
iron,
Mummy number 2,
please be more like mummy number 1,
she seems to think,
I dont like you mummy number 2
when you decide to have a drink.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Britney (70.96.207.36) -- Tuesday, April 5 2005, 03:39 am The power of those words were amazing. Thats so sad though..... how cruel world can be now days. you know? Great poem!!!!! so intense! ~Britney~ :) |
| Ben f (81.100.175.132) -- Tuesday, April 5 2005, 08:33 am thanks Britney,yeah it is sad,and its going on every single day. Thanks for reading, Ben |
| Angel in Tears (81.129.18.5) -- Saturday, April 9 2005, 08:08 pm My heart sinks when I read this poem.Very effective. |
| Ben f (81.100.175.132) -- Saturday, April 9 2005, 08:22 pm thansk for reading. take care, much love Ben |
| celina (82.11.250.193) -- Wednesday, April 18 2007, 08:30 pm that poem is very good i would like my mum 2 be mummy number 1 |
| bling (203.173.207.95) -- Wednesday, June 20 2007, 02:57 pm i wna thank 2 every 1 n tell thm i love u 2, bt,, my heart stops as i hear its still happenn 2dae, its a whole new dae bt can never b perfect..as i wish all da bad could never turn 2 b.. bt on da other hand we do ned bads bt nt likes thoes |
| sadie (12.217.4.198) -- Wednesday, January 23 2008, 01:12 am that is so sad! my heart sinks every time i hear someone has been abused no one deserves to be treated like crap and hurt like that it doesn't matter what they have done |
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