Tears
6 April, 2005
Author: Britney
Tears they keep falling from my
eyes from my eyes and I really don't
know why. I wish I can't make them
go away go away but they seem as
they really don't want to go away
they really want to stay.
I feel the tears across my face.
In streams they do race. From my
eyes to my nose til they drip off my
chin. They hit they floor I say goodbye
for my tiny tears I cry and cry.
I feel they can go forever and never stop.
It's like there a waterfall. I release them out
to try to cleanse me. My tears of tears
they always flow. Everything makes
them seem to go.
For my tears are such an endless
flow that seem such a part of my
life which I can't ever let go...
So therefore my tears I cry and cry saying goodbye :'(
------- Author's Notes -------
this is true for me in alot of ways. ~Britney~ |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Meridian (172.134.176.46) -- Thursday, April 7 2005, 03:29 am Hey Britney! Sounds like a song! You goin' to the studio to express your talent? I like the way your words repeat like that! Wonderful poem B! Hope you cry tears of joy next time! LOL! ---Meri |
| Britney (70.97.74.106) -- Thursday, April 7 2005, 05:42 am HI! A song intresting should tell my dad so he can make a beat......! Tried something kind of different by repeating I suppose.....! I guess me and you tended to like it at least. I wish I could cry tears of joy also!!!! ~*Britney*~ |
| Alan (82.43.124.243) -- Thursday, April 7 2005, 11:08 am Oh dont cry lol here take this hankie for them tears and dont cry..life is not worth all them tears. |
| Britney (70.97.74.106) -- Thursday, April 7 2005, 02:46 pm Alan a hankie will that even do? lol. I guess life may not be worth the tears but yet I cry them sometimes.....! ~Britney~ |
| Alan (82.43.124.243) -- Friday, April 8 2005, 04:03 pm Ok here is a box of kleenex i have shares in this company lol |
| Britney (70.97.74.106) -- Saturday, April 9 2005, 02:32 am thanks...~Britney~ |
| Britney (67.136.94.248) -- Wednesday, April 13 2005, 03:10 am Oo lol i just realized what u said lol u gave me 1 tissue now u gave a me whole box lol. thanks what a dork i am.... ~Britney~ thanks a million Alan |
| Alan (82.43.124.186) -- Friday, April 15 2005, 09:52 pm your welcome anytime :-) |
| mental (66.153.163.156) -- Saturday, April 16 2005, 01:28 am you know your poem sounds almost cute in a way . i can almost hear a baby like talk doing this poem. but it is a tear jerking poem the kind that you lie in the dark and repeat it over and over. otherwise excellent poem thank you for it. |
| Britney (67.136.93.53) -- Saturday, April 16 2005, 08:02 pm Hey thanks alot. *smiles* appreciated for the comment always. yeah your right it can be cute... then again sad in the same way like sitting in a corner crying and just crying. I'm glad you think its an excellent poem. Your welcome for it! ~Britney~ |
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