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Unanswered Question
11 April, 2005
Author: RubyDragon

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Shall I see you the way I wish
or know you the way you are?,
another question that stirs my heart
are you my lonely, loving star?
I'm not sure about anything anymore
is love real or just another fantasy flaw?

What I do know is this:
I am here, you are there,
I want you, you don't see me,
I love you, do you care?
an unknown answer to a pivotal query
now I am tired and my soul is weary,

I love you and always will
but it's time for me to move on,
always knowing in my heart
I will play forever loves song,
Shall I see you the way I wish
or know you the way you are?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.197) -- Monday, April 11 2005, 08:02 pm

RD

UQ, what a great title! In your second stanza, it's like I can see a man holding a meeting with staff, and you're all sitting around a long, rectangular looking table occupied with coffee.
I tell ya, you just blow my mind with your deep expressions/feelings, it's just that fantastic!
Keep it comin', keep it comin'!
---Meri
Leah06 (67.169.135.192) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 04:38 am

Ruby

this is a beautiful poem. thank you for sharing it.
 
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