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Im Sorry
12 April, 2005
Author: dark3nstar

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im sorry i couldnt make you happy,
im sorry i made you sad,
what did i do to make you so mad?
why did you have to do that?
why did it have to be me?
what did i do to deserve this?
does this really have to be?
what made you do this?
was it because of me?
couldnt you have spared me one chance
and just let me be?
where were you when i needed you?
why cant you be here with me?
why did you do this?
i dont understand why this had to be.
now im here alone
without you by my side
wondering where you are.
im still here
lying on the floor
where you left me,
dying on the floor

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Comments on this poem/writing:

DAISY (67.10.72.217) -- Tuesday, September 5 2006, 05:39 am

PLZ

CAN I USE UR PIAM
james (68.46.231.244) -- Wednesday, September 27 2006, 09:36 pm

can i use it

its dope and may help me save my relationship
Elise (207.63.43.49) -- Monday, October 2 2006, 04:00 pm

good

That is a really good poem. Keep writing!! Things will get better. youll find someone. True love is were you can work through anything and be there for each other and never give up. Sometimes i feel like the only true love is god. Maybe im right. i dont know i have a tendency to be wrong
danny (84.9.165.118) -- Friday, November 3 2006, 01:23 pm

inviolate soul

what takes this and makes this love again?the broken heart so full of pain, what kick starts the heart back into the game.
ashlie (152.163.100.5) -- Thursday, December 14 2006, 09:26 am

hey

hey i really want to use this poem i really like it i wanted to put it in my info on myspace b/c of what my x did to me i wanted to post it thank you
MADDIE (75.47.142.20) -- Thursday, April 19 2007, 06:25 am

UMM..

CAN I USE UR POEM??
Destiny (130.156.50.3) -- Tuesday, October 30 2007, 06:52 pm

I love it, Its so true

can I use your poem PLZ =]
 
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