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Fear Of The Future
12 April, 2005
Author: Mike

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They say I look and sound like him.
Does that mean I'll commit his sins?
Will I love my kids too much?
Will I give more then a fatherly touch?

They say we think and act the same.
For this, are we both to blame?
Even so, will I do what he has done?
Will I have some 'harmless' fun?

Someone tell me if I'll be
The side of my father few can see.
Will I follow in his steps?
Or will my hands by my side be kept?

Look into your crystal ball.
See my future and tell me all.
Tell me the person I will becom,
But if you tell me I'm him, the time has come.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Raimee (80.5.40.153) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 09:57 pm

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I can tell you now, you're nothing like him. You would never do that. I really like this poem.
Angel in Tears (81.129.103.245) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 10:12 pm

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Couldn't agree more with Raimee.......The future is what you make it.It has not yet been set in concrete...but one thing for sure,YOU AINT LIKE HIM!!!!
Holly (82.34.160.81) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 10:33 pm

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Not meaning to get too psychlogical, afterall, this isn't my territroy, But people tend to do things such as that based on their upbringing, and young life, being full of neglect.. All I can say is with friends like us, we'll try and never make you twisted and neglected like that? Also, think about your views on the other person, that we both know, who's done things vaguely of that nature...your reaction to him was very negative, so you're not like that. I hope this doesn't offend you, I'm trying to help. :) My, I'm going on alot, but very good poem.
Taylor James (212.85.21.178) -- Thursday, April 14 2005, 02:08 pm

NEVER

Mike,all i can say is you will never become like him,you have the best heart of anyone i have ever seen,and i know that no matter ehat happens you will NEVER IN YOUR LIFE be anything like him. so dont worry ok,but really good poem :]
Mike (212.85.21.178) -- Thursday, April 14 2005, 04:21 pm

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Thanks for the reassurance, but there will always be that doubt.
Raimee (80.5.40.153) -- Thursday, April 14 2005, 05:51 pm

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Mike, there's no doubt. Think about what he's done and stuff, ask yourself.. Would you ever do that? I know in my heart what the answer is, whats your answer? When you figure that out, which you will in about 2 seconds.. You'll know you won't be like him.
Mike (82.35.77.233) -- Friday, April 15 2005, 11:43 am

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Yes, but I'm sure that when he was 16 he didn't feel he was going to be like that..
Raimee (80.5.40.153) -- Saturday, April 16 2005, 10:04 pm

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You're a much better person inside. And how do you know he didn't feel like doing stuff like that?
Mike (212.85.21.178) -- Monday, April 18 2005, 03:52 pm

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Well it's hard to imagine that at 16 you'd have those sort of urges..
Raimee (80.5.40.153) -- Wednesday, April 20 2005, 04:17 pm

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I'm sure it's not impossible.
Jeremaih Barton (209.193.20.19) -- Wednesday, November 1 2006, 08:07 pm

Fear of the Future

My I use your poem so I can use it for my school and tell about fear. Thank you
 
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