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Myself
13 April, 2005
Author: Mere

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I've been babied by my mother,
Psychologically abused like no other,
Everyone labels me, it hurts everyday,
Even the people who made me...I guess that's okay,
I cut out the pain and hurt inside,
A new line everyday, I'm par for the ride,
You think that I'm dying, I'm staying alive,
Six feet under, I'm taking the dive,
The ground is hard and black inside,
I think I'm okay, you know that I lied,
Sometimes I fall flat on my face,
And pretend that I'm in a better place,
I've seen more sh*t than you ever will,
You ignore what I say, and you just stand still.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.100.197) -- Thursday, April 14 2005, 08:18 pm

Mere! Mere! Mere!

I am in love with your poem! I see this category is under thoughts. Think some more then. LOL! You work is fascinating and an attention-grabber!
---Meri
=-ladybluE-= (210.213.82.125) -- Sunday, October 8 2006, 10:38 pm

Spectacular!

Gosh! It was so spectacular Poem... Nice job... Awesome!
barb (67.58.203.201) -- Monday, October 9 2006, 12:46 am

expressing yourself is good

This is a good way of letting others know what they do is wrong. Very good read.
lil soldier (174.16.13.162) -- Sunday, November 22 2009, 11:22 am

the great poem

This poem is really good and awesome
jh (69.229.72.108) -- Friday, May 14 2010, 01:14 am

i like your poem

i think your poem is good, and i feel the same as you feel.
lol (71.164.108.108) -- Saturday, June 26 2010, 11:57 pm

lol

lol cool
 
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