All I Have Left To Do Now by dark3nstar

i walk to school
with my head hung low
i carry with me
my only friend i'll ever know

i run to the bathroom
and shut the door
then slowly slip to the floor.
i've pulled out my best friend now,
and say slowly,
'this is all i have left to do now.

i grip the razor
with my hands shaking wildly
roll up my sleeve and press fimly.
now the only thing to do is wait

as blood rolls down my arm onto the floor
i think about the things that i wont see anymore.
like back stabbers
and people that have hurt me so terribly

now i sit and stare into the light
i think to myself,
this is finally my time.

Taylor James (212.85.21.178) -- Thursday, April 14 2005, 02:51 pm

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this poem is really good,i used to feel like that so much,i really like the poem *taylor*

Angel in Tears (81.157.150.81) -- Thursday, April 14 2005, 11:45 pm

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Well don't let the blade control your life...and its not the only friend you know...consider anyone to comment on your poems a friend, if I may speak for all of us!xxx

stephanie (209.215.20.220) -- Friday, June 24 2005, 06:07 am

great
this peom is definelty just like me. i am the same way and i think u are so truthful

Puddin 2 (75.180.227.61) -- Tuesday, July 3 2007, 06:50 am

definitely
Angel In Tears is right... We're all your friend.. I've had the blade control my life and it's really not the best friend to have... you said the thing you won't see anymore is back stabbers and people that have hurt you... think about it you just described your razor blade!... it's stabbed you and hurt you!!!

Don't let it hurt you anymore!!!

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