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Ive Never Felt So Alone
15 April, 2005
Author: Taylor James

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Ive never felt so lonely
in a room filled with friends,
Ive never felt so cold
in a room filled with heat,
Ive never heard so little
in a room filled with noise
The point im trying to make
is dont leave me all alone.

------- Author's Notes -------

short but i think the message gets accross.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.233.131) -- Saturday, April 16 2005, 10:13 pm

sometimes loneliness opens our hearts to reality..

Hi Taylor.....sad when one can feel the loneliness more.... when they have someone in their life ...than when there was no body in it before.. great read..Terrie*
Seizure (68.154.119.5) -- Sunday, April 17 2005, 05:13 am

yeah...

I can relate to it... especially as of late. I think it was well worded.
Taylor James (217.39.5.168) -- Sunday, April 17 2005, 09:46 pm

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hey terrie* and seizure thnk you for your comments i know its a kinda short poem but i think i managed to get what i was feek#ling acroos,and your right loneliness does open ur heart to reality. thanks 4 the comments nuf love *taylor*
 
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