My Heart Caint Take It Any More
17 April, 2005
Author: Terrie*
I was a rose budding from a vine
when love exposed itself to this heart of mine
my heart is breaking
my heart is dying
my heart has broken
my heart has died
now I am a rose withering away
love has nothing more to say
my heart caint mend
my heart just bleeds
my heart has taken a leave
my heart lost it's last ounce of life
when he pulled his love from me
his love is tearing me apart
when it became the thorn in my heart
my heart got punished
for the crime of loving
now my heart is paying the time
for falling in love with loving him
------- Author's Notes -------
how love taken away would feel.. |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Seizure (68.154.119.5) -- Sunday, April 17 2005, 05:06 am I liked it. Well written. |
| Terrie* (65.148.201.154) -- Sunday, April 17 2005, 08:48 pm thank you swetie,the good ole' heart can only take so much..but it can recover... |
| Seizure (68.154.119.5) -- Sunday, April 17 2005, 11:09 pm True Terrie.. the heart can only take so much. It would appear mine's maxed out... And yeah, I agree.. it'll recover.. if nothing else goes wrong... (small chance of that). Good read... again. |
| Terrie* (65.148.201.154) -- Sunday, April 17 2005, 11:27 pm aye' sweetie, if your like me..your a die heart..we are survivors....i at one time thought mine was maxed out..soooo....i kept it safe for many many years after death stole my love from me...i've done been through the worst battle of the jungles a hellatious stoppage of time....i was as patient as i could be..but i became my own worst enemy...then someone wise & knowledgable,was brave enough to love me and my challenging stone cold heart....their love melted that stone wall like ice.. ...a heart like that will find you as it did me....nothing will go wrong....just trust your own heart...Terrie* |
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