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Wait For Me
18 April, 2005
Author: Angel In Tears

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Don't die, not just yet.
I sound selfish I know,
But I could not take this,
I could not.

Don't be the one to leave,
Don't be the one that makes me bleed.
I plead you here,
Don’t, please don't,
Please don't leave!
Not today.

Your the only one left,
If you get up and leave,
I'll be sitting here by myself,
Don't you care?

I'll give up my heart away
To you,
I'll give up my youth if
I have to.

I'm preparing myself.
Preparing for your departure,
Departure into time,
Into loneliness.

This unknown love for you inside is tearing me apart.
If I take Death's hand,
Would he leave you?
Or would he take you too?
But then we would be together, and
I would take care off you,
I could be your guardian angel.

Let's just go to sleep.
Close your eyes and go adrift.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.100.197) -- Tuesday, April 19 2005, 09:33 pm

I'll wait up

A friend in need when you need one! But I think you're talking about a boy here. Hehehe.... I'll wait up for you as far as friendship goes, and he'll wait up for you as far as love goes...
Glad to see you posting once more! Thanks for all the encouragement in your comments! Great emotion expressed! I love the tone! Keep it flowin'!
---Meri
Angel in Tears (81.157.219.34) -- Friday, April 22 2005, 11:23 am

Glad to be back...LOL

Well sorry to disappoint you but this poem is about a person that I love, however it's not love in that kinda way:p I wrote this when I found out that my one and only granddad is dieing. And the other 3 that I posted up on the same day, all written in the run up to his death and after. No boys unfortunately are present in my life atm:p. Thank you for your comment. I really appreciate it.Angel in Tears xxx
Meridian (205.188.117.10) -- Friday, April 22 2005, 03:01 pm

No disappointment taken (lol)

Hhahha...Even I had added I think this poem was about your love for a boy...I was just saying if you needed a friend you know? LOL! You had me chuckling when you said, "sorry to disappoint you"... Both of us are waiting for Prince Charming to sweep us off our feet!
Again, very good poem A.I.T!
---Meri
Angel in Tears (81.157.223.69) -- Saturday, April 23 2005, 09:52 pm

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LOL! Thank you Meri, it's nice and good to know that someone is there for me.lol Yeah, Prince Charming....:p one problem though...they take their timeeeeeeeee,lol. And I though girls where bad at taking their time, lol. Apparently not!Angel in Tears xxx
 
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