To Be Free... by Taylor James

Sleep with me tonight,
go into the land thats also tight,
nowhere to go,
nothing to see.
just you and me
dreaming to be free.

unload your problems,
in this care free place,
go somewhere new,
and find a new face.

theres no point in dreaming of the past,
no ones comming, this worlds too fast.
dont cry yourself to sleep
as you dont need to fear
because nothing will be able to harm you here.

lets never wake up
to the reality of life
we dont need this trouble,
we dont need this strife.

so come along
join in with me,
on this journey
to be set free.

Mike (82.35.244.198) -- Thursday, April 21 2005, 12:13 pm

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This is my favourite of yours. To me, it seems as if you're talking in your sleep. I'm gonna go into a bit of a religious thing here, so bear with me.. It's as if you're talking to your guardian angel, and your trying to convince him/her to let you sleep forever so you don't have to wake into 'reality'. It seems as if you're asking your guardian angel to take you to heaven, when you say "unload your problems in this carefree place", but then when you say "nowhere to go, nothing to see", that seems as if you believe that there is nothing after death. When you say "We don't need this trouble, we don't need this strife", it sounds as if you're trying to convince yourself as well as your guardian angel. In the last stanza, you seem to be asking your guardian angel to come with you to make you feel safe. That's my interpretation anyway..

Taylor James (212.85.21.178) -- Thursday, April 21 2005, 01:46 pm

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yooodles mike,thanks for your interpritation of the poem,at the time i was just writing bout how i felt and it came out like this!!anyways to me it also has another meaning,i was also thinking of a friend who is having trouble and basicly wanted to say that the person is safe with me.if you get what i mean.anyways thnx for your comment love **Taylor**

Britney (172.16.1.225) -- Thursday, April 21 2005, 06:54 pm

Wow.
Awesome poem. I loved it. It made me feel as if I was in a dream with the "person" i like. your such a great writer. ~Britney~

Taylor James (212.85.21.178) -- Friday, April 22 2005, 03:21 pm

:D
hey hun,yet again you have a positive thing to say about my poem,your soooo sweet!!!!thanks for you comment britney always appriciated from such a fantastic writer like you love **Taylor**

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