vinebar

Out Of Reach
22 April, 2005
Author: Hellsing

vinebar

When i met you, i felt a change,
And then my life was re-arranged,
A girl that's fun and so secure,
the way i found myself around her.
but life it seems, has other plans,
for no matter what i can demand,
she has a life to live away,
and things i feel i cannot say.
So now i let things take their course,
And never let anything be forced,
and though i think these things for her,
I know that life is never sure.
For things i've done, i feel so bad,
For all the times i've made you mad,
but now i see you're out of touch,
and i have no right to ask so much.

------- Author's Notes -------

written to clarify a feeling....

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

Angel in Tears (81.157.223.69) -- Saturday, April 23 2005, 10:29 pm

....

Death is the only that stops people, so don't let anything else try and get in between your feelings, Hellsing. Hope you all the best, An Angel in Tears
Joy (66.223.226.218) -- Tuesday, July 26 2005, 02:09 am

Beautiful

this is a brilliant poem. i was, seriously, moved by your honesty in this poem. im crazy about it! keep it up.
SCSnicoleSCS (68.114.68.111) -- Wednesday, August 3 2005, 06:20 pm

i wish

you sound like a good person. I wish i had someone to care for me that way. keep up the writing and i'll keep up the reading.
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by Hellsing

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2021-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com  so the proper person may be notified.