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In A Druggies Paradise...
25 April, 2005
Author: Heaven

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its getting harder to breathe,
harder to let go,
harder to see,
harder to forget and way too hard to have faith or believe,

my hands keep shaking and i refuse to look you in the eye,
i thought i was to obvious,
but no one saw the signs,
why cant you see.....
im in a druggies paradise..

wanting to go,
wanting to stay torn between what you want and what you know you dont need,

fighting to hold on but dying to let go,
someone please tell me what has happened to this girl,

she was doing so good now shes forgotten to try,
getting way to comfortable.....
in a druggies paradise..

always happy she seems to be,
but she wants to know what has happened to her goals and her dreams,
she use to want to go somewhere,
now she wants to leave,

her pain is just to great,
and her urges are just to strong,she hopes its not to late,
but shes already too far gone,

who would of thought,
this is how she would die,
just another lost soul.......
IN A DRUGGIES PARADISE!!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Angel in Tears (81.129.103.58) -- Monday, April 25 2005, 09:04 pm

WOW

Really,really good work!
shane (65.7.41.184) -- Tuesday, May 10 2005, 01:35 am

i will alway love u

the best thing i ever read
heaven (208.182.192.101) -- Friday, August 5 2005, 06:29 pm

shane(my one and only)

thank you very much....ill always love you.
Amy (66.63.205.232) -- Friday, April 27 2007, 10:58 pm

WOW

I love this poem and it is so good.You really know what 2 write about and it is so ture.
heaven (208.182.196.194) -- Tuesday, December 4 2007, 06:51 pm

amy

thank you very much
chasy+ (24.181.77.55) -- Friday, May 23 2008, 02:07 am

A druggies paradise

This was very moving. i know what you mean when you say she is stuck between the two worlds of wanting good but having the dying urge to go take some drugs. i have a very close person to me that is like this, its hard.
Dejarvu (83.229.48.149) -- Friday, May 22 2009, 10:04 pm

So Real!

This is so real 'n' touchy.... It's better not to go near it....Better
 
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