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Runaway
25 April, 2005
Author: Mandy Steder

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In the slums of Chicago
a teenage walks
so sick of the lectures-
os sick of the talks.

Thinking she can make it
all on her own,
he walks with her bags,
so tired and alone.

No call to her mother,
to tell her she's okay.
she puts it off
yet another day.

Posters with her picture
and numbers to call
the sees on trees
and begins to bawl.

She just wants to go home
but doesnt know how.
its just something she wont do-
its something she wont allow.

------- Author's Notes -------

I wrote this about my friend

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Comments on this poem/writing:

jessica m (68.249.94.112) -- Thursday, April 28 2005, 03:40 pm

thank you

this is about me and you captured the feelings perfectly so thankyou
mandy (69.216.44.135) -- Wednesday, May 11 2005, 03:44 pm

aww

i love you, jessica! i am so happy you are my friend :)
Ditz (198.150.40.60) -- Thursday, October 20 2005, 08:43 pm

wow you guys!

hey nemo...it's angel! that is so sweet! you better write one about me! lol...jk! love ya! *muah*
Jenell (198.150.40.60) -- Thursday, October 20 2005, 08:44 pm

Impressive

you have an amazing writing talent that I hope you realize and keep in use!!!
mandy steder (205.213.111.50) -- Monday, May 1 2006, 06:25 pm

i miss everyone

it is my 1st and i was just let out. i miss everyone so much. i feel so lost.
jaiera (74.138.17.34) -- Thursday, February 22 2007, 10:13 pm

powerful

this poem is so powerful and i can truly relate to the the words mean so much to me and it brings back so many memories and is a way of telling me Don't Go Back! i used to be lost thank GOD i found myself
tay (75.35.30.69) -- Tuesday, March 13 2007, 11:19 pm

wow

how u made it so real and easy to write
mandy steder (71.98.15.199) -- Sunday, December 9 2007, 12:31 am

ive been there

i hope you all can keep your lives under wraps i know it is hard, but we all get through it somehow good lick and keep it up xoxoxox
 
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