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Sunrise
5 May, 2005
Author: Ing Twi Demalah

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Met upon the porch,
in the early hours of the morn did we,
and danced to music that was not there,
marveled at stars we could not see,

smiled at a touch I could not feel,
talked of flowers she could not show,
and kept her warm and shielded her,
from a breeze that did not blow,

laughed at moments never shared,
longed for places never been,
yet in the midst of all of this,
grew we closer than any friend,

woke I from my slumber,
no trace of her could I find,
and knew that all had been,
in the fields within my mind,

yet as the sun rose,
painting colors on morning’s skies,
I was content to think of her,
and watch the sunrise through her eyes,

------- Author's Notes -------

When we are away from the ones we love, we often have beautifully vivid dreams about sharing special moments with them.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.206.169) -- Thursday, May 5 2005, 03:27 am

Your words capture a lonely heart

Ing,this is absolutely amazin', with warm tears rollin' down ..i thank you for sharin' your heart,with such soft words that capture our soul..and placed a warm embrace in many lonely hearts .soooo beautifully written.
Meridian (64.12.116.197) -- Friday, May 6 2005, 06:40 pm

Away

Yeah, sometimes being alone is very difficult. No one to talk to, no one to laugh and joke with, no one to eat dinner or drink with, no one to watch movies at home with. Just silence, except for the locusts and praying mantises... Hehehe....
Very, very good title! It ties in with your claim and support beautifully! By the way, you're just an expert period. I know when I see 'Ing Twi Demalah' under 'New Poems This Week' you'll have something that will make my day!
 
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