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Sunshine Slaughter
5 May, 2005
Author: Mental

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I don't smile much anymore
hang down my head
stare at the floor,
it makes my tears flow faster
than running down my cheeks
crying is my master
i feel so meek.
the sunshine slaughter
is stabbing through
the moonlight healing
it feels so cool.
my midnight wanderings
my insight scroll
take it with me
on a mental stroll.
burning embers
firelight streams
dive into a ocean
as for off as it seems.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.106.154) -- Thursday, May 5 2005, 02:54 pm

Hi Mental

I really liked this poem. It was really good. I felt you on what you were saying..
Angel in Tears (81.129.187.96) -- Thursday, May 5 2005, 06:43 pm

...

Feeling the thoughts in these words. Brilliant!
 
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