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Addicted
14 May, 2005
Author: Angel In Tears

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The wonderful time off our lives.
The beautifully grotesque children.
The ill-happy teenagers.

Sitting with an abuser.
A cutter, a hater of thy self.
The shadow which sits next to him,
Shares a passion off the similar art.
Decorating once in a while, so not to be to horrid,
Scars take long to heal.

Another way of controlling, is taking place.
It’s not deprivation, it the un-necessarity of it.
Poisoning when it’s placed in thy system,
Which in my view is not needed.
Yet, feeling like fainting, every time the
Poison is not present,
When hated cravings come back.

Oh, what a day!
Routined in this need to control,
But slipping up when nothing goes our way.
Addicted, to hurt,
Addicted, to pain,
Addicted of dieing each day.

------- Author's Notes -------

On a day-to-day basis we control.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.136.7.51) -- Saturday, May 14 2005, 10:42 pm

yes we are all addicted to somethin'

Angel in Tears, i am sooooo "addicted" to your creations. girl you got strength in your words keep them flowin' i crave more.LOL ,on a more serious note your writin' is a sign of quality and that is a sign of excellence my dear friend,
'aye when it comes to poetry i am high maintenance .yours are a major Bomb girl
Angel in Tears (81.157.151.21) -- Sunday, May 15 2005, 12:59 pm

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All these compliments are so unexpected, lol *blush* Thank you sooo much! Well today I will be smiling all day long! lol I am not sure what else to say but to thank you again.
Taylor James (81.139.254.39) -- Sunday, May 15 2005, 05:59 pm

wow...

hi angel,i could be wrong here but im guessing this poem is about sum1 you know.this poem is so good,it really is exellent.im nearly in tears whilst reading this poem.wow,your poetry kepps getin better everytime i read. i absolutley love this poem
Angel in Tears (81.157.220.198) -- Monday, May 16 2005, 09:08 pm

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Hey Taylor!Yeah I got inspired by a friend.You might know this friend .I wrote this in an english lesson.Thank you for the warm comment
Meridian (205.188.117.10) -- Monday, May 16 2005, 09:42 pm

A.I.T

The angel! Addicted! Seems like someone being immune to the worse. In a way, you can say I'm addicted to emotional stress and other. LOL! You're good! Keep writing!
Angel in Tears (81.157.221.252) -- Wednesday, May 18 2005, 07:50 pm

Hey Meridian

Thank you for your comment! I am glad you like this poem. Thank you also for the compliment! And with all these in coregents I shall try to keep writing!
 
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