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Save Me
15 May, 2005
Author: Karri

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everytime i see you i see myself dying in your arms
and i see you cry for me
as i lay lifeless and bleeding
i was told that it was ok to die
that i wouldn't feel any pain
but i feel so much pain
i just wanted it to all go away
the pain, the fear,the anger
i never meant to hurt you but i couldn't hold on any longer
i know you were trying to help me
but it wasnt enough
i love you so much
please don't hate me
why didn't you save me
it's too late now
im forever gone
you had your chance but you blew it
now im in a coffin six feet in the ground
slowly rotting away
i hate you for not saving me and i hate you for
letting me do this
i need you, i need your touch, your love
i long to see your face
just hold me in your arms for one last time
warm my body, heal my pain, love me til death do us part
im sorry i never meant to do this to you
i just wanted to kill the pain
just know that someday we will be together once again
in each others arms
hold me tight and make this right
never let me go
always remember me

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Terrie* (65.148.207.109) -- Sunday, May 15 2005, 09:44 pm

Karri

beautiful job of showin' your emotions, i cain feel them in this , i felt so much anger when my husband passed away , yet it was not in his control,i was just angry cause nobody wants to be left alone, i over came it and eventually accepted his death, i still miss him w/no doubt, when i think of him i never think of his last day instead i think of all our other days together.thanx for sharin'
 
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