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My Request To The Moon
17 May, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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the only times
our hearts really touch
is when our moons
come out at night

I sleep with the moon
when he is fully awake
and he sleeps with her
when I am the one that remains awake
when all that breath have fallen asleep

it is durin' these precious hours
and only in our dreams
our hearts dance high above every cloud

for now that is all we can offer each other
from far away
until God brings us together
that one faithful Blessed day

so if you ever see the moon sharin' a smile
she is tellin' you
that I just shared a secret
and a long romantic request
for her to remain hangin' upon heavens
tapestry window in the sky
so i could keep him a bit longer
in my dreams

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Faith (216.167.226.93) -- Wednesday, May 18 2005, 01:53 am

WOW!!!

I think this poem is amazing you got a true gift when it comes to writing poetry thank you for sharing it with us all.
Terrie* (65.142.64.164) -- Wednesday, May 18 2005, 11:50 pm

Faith ,

the true gift in my poetry are the those like you ,whom are able to place themselves in my soul and read deep into my feelings and if i cain just touch and move one soul then my poetry is a gift shared .thanx for such a warm comment it means alot.
 
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