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Whats Missing??
17 May, 2005
Author: Taylor James

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searching my soul
look what i find
a pile of nothing
im empty inside.

i look at my friends
look what i see
a pile of pure beauty
there full of duty.

why am i empty?
why am i alone?
why do i cry?
why dont i have a soul?
these question i want to ask.

you say him upstairs will answer
yet i still wait for a reply.

im empty inside
i dont know why
is because of what i am?
a faggot, a poof, a freak?
ive been called them all.

maybe god agrees
maybe this is why he wont answer.
i dont know
i cant explain.

all i know is
im all alone.

i know i have friends
and there great too
but somthing deep inside
is missing.

my soul has gone
it left just like that.

please god if your listening,
answer me this:
where has my soul gone?

------- Author's Notes -------

just want to say to my friends that i know you are there by my side, but i have somthing missing, but i dont know what.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben f (81.100.175.132) -- Wednesday, May 18 2005, 10:00 am

God

God will always hear what you have to say,
but its you that has to change things,
god can only give you guidence....its up to you to follow his directions.
barb (216.191.60.119) -- Friday, May 20 2005, 12:10 am

good

Ben's right there is a saying " He who helps himself, I will help. With your determination and his help. He will listen. Good writing Keep sharing with us .
 
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