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Dear Heaven
19 May, 2005
Author: mArLeNe

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You seem to be missing an angel and he seems to be here with me
I'm guessing he might have escaped, because who would set him free
He's a person like no other, one that I always longed to find
A soul to never be compared, a real one of a kind
The joy of looking into those eyes and the bliss of falling for his smile
I know its been a mighty long time but could he stay for just a while
It may be too much to ask for, but what else can I do
He is truly an original, he is a dream come true
He is every wish that was never granted, every present I never got
He is every Christmas never spent, every birthday forgot
Thank you for putting him in my way, he's got everything I lack
I know its time for him to come home now but please don't take him back!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.100.197) -- Friday, May 20 2005, 05:36 pm

Another w-o-n-d-e-r-f-u-l poem

Writing a letter to Heaven, I think I did that when I was just knee-high, asking God to please grant a few of my requests. Don't you hate it when a person you love so dear whether it be a friend or a family member either ends up:
a) moving b) being sick c) dead
It always seems the ones you are close to end up doing one of the above; well at least the ones I've known, and it hurts like crazy.
Cool poem Marlene! Another powerful one!
Joanne (172.188.221.180) -- Thursday, April 26 2007, 02:31 pm

So Strong

All you poems are so powerfull i am amazed that you can write so strongly at such a young age i think you really need to talk to some one about you feeling darlin
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Bipedalguy (4.156.51.69) -- Friday, April 27 2007, 01:22 am

Great poem

This is an excellent poem. I suspect that this person you hope doesn't leave is probably quite lucky. If he likes good writers he'll probably stay.
Keep 'em coming. Bipe
 
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