Cry
21 May, 2005
Author: Nikki Pee
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we cry when we are sad we cry when we are mad we cry when we are happy i cry all the time i'm about to give up should i roll up in a ball and die because i'm having a hard time with my life i wanted everything to be right i wanted to never cry again for being sad or mad but i was wrong i cried so many tears last night i could feel up a river can anything or anyone stop me from crying |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Von (152.163.100.197) -- Saturday, May 21 2005, 03:20 am Nikki everything will get better soon |
| Mila (152.163.100.197) -- Saturday, May 21 2005, 03:35 am I like your poem it's sad i feel for you |
| coolieM (12.169.107.65) -- Monday, May 23 2005, 02:29 am keep your faith girl. god has a plan for you - you may not understand what it is and why it is happening, but it's god's will and it must be done. just stay strong. |
| Tarna (66.72.31.26) -- Wednesday, June 8 2005, 05:41 am I think everyone can say they have felt like this at one time or another. Needing a good cry to cleanse the spirit. This poem captures the feeling of the helplessness of being out of control of the past. May I suggest that you try writing in stanzas. Your poem seems to have a natural flow towards that direction. Again I really like how this poem expresses the feelings. Good job |
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